Today in writing we finished our lighthouse writing from Tuesday. this story is about a lighthouse and a lighthouse man where the light in the light house broke and a ship was coming find out what happens and here's a link to watch the video I watched.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_continue=1&v=6HfBbSUORvo&feature=emb_logo
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, May 7, 2020
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Hi Son! Its Rylan i just want to say have a good day and hope u stay safe at home love your writing keep up the good work from ur friend, Rylan
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