Monday, June 15, 2020
10 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi son i really like how you created robot cat and robot bunny.It reminds me of when i went to Geraldine holiday park i saw a really crazy bunny i called it drama queen.Next time you could make a robot cat with scratch powers.
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Hi son I really like about the robot cat.It reminds me of Eli's cat.
ReplyDeletenext time you could make robot dog. from Samuel.
hi i like how you made it funny it reminds me of play fighting with my cat next time you could make it more interesting. from josh R
ReplyDeleteThat was interesting though did you not like it (._.)
DeleteHi Son cool animation keep the good work up! 👍
ReplyDeleteHi Son it is Miss Goslin and Whakarua 1 and 3 year 4s here. I am teaching them how to make comments on children's blogs. We think its pretty awesome that you created those pictures yourself, Mia loves the bunny. The bunny reminded Eliza of her Rabbit at home. Next time you could add some full stops into your paragraphs. You could do this by rereading your work. It was an awesome story!
ReplyDeleteThanks miss Goslin.
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ReplyDeleteHi Son! I really like the pick a path, r u able to do a sequel in the holidays?? I would rly like to see a sequel :D.
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Hi son its Lukas. I really like your robot cat and robot bunny and your pick-a-path story, really like it!
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