I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Last week and this week our writing teacher read us a Maori legend which was about how the south island was made it was really cool I loved it a lot it makes you really think about what the images are like.
We had to rewrite the story by reading it and then writing it on a document. But we had to do a plan first because everybody needs a plan because you can't do anything with out a plan. And that was it hear is my writing and good bye
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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