Our writing group did that but we had to do it about Anzac day. The hard thing I found about the activity was to find all the nouns for the poem, for some reason I found that part the hardest it would usually be the easiest because it's just names. The thing I found best was decorating it because, I draw my own pictures and I think they look good. I drew pictures about the things I put on the poem for example I put a grave on it. The thing I found the most interesting was how it the poem looks. So some times the poems don't look like a diamond but that doesn't really matter, the only thing that matters is making the poem good.
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, May 19, 2021
Anzac Diamante poem
In writing our writing group are looking at poems. This is the second poem that we have done this term, it is called a Diamante poem. A Diamante poem is a poem that has a only one noun on the top, two adjectives on the second line, three verbs on the next line, four nouns then you do the same but the opposite way. Three verbs, two adjectives and one noun forming a diamond.
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